We need to rewrite the input into human- writing using simple everyday small words instead of complex longer words. Vary sentence length, use forms instead of contractions. Repeat keywords instead of pronouns. Add touch/POV. Avoid AI buzzwords. Keep formatting like bullet points? The input doesn’t have bullet points or markdown. It has paragraphs separated by lines. Must keep number of newlines/paragraphs. The genre is a business description, marketing copy. Need to rewrite into human voice.
We should keep names like Midas, Makeida Midas, etc. Keep proper nouns unchanged. Keep paragraphs count: Lets count. Input paragraphs:
1: “Midas Beauty Concepts began in 2010 in Parco Bazar, Palayam, Calicut under the leadership of Muhammed V and Abdullah V. The idea was simple but powerful. To make authentic and premium beauty parlour equipment and cosmetic products available to everyone. That vision laid the foundation for what would grow into India’s beauty parlour equipment and cosmetics showroom.”
2: “In 2022 the founders joined forces with partners. Driven by energy and a shared goal they rebranded the business as Makeida Midas. This wasn’t a name change. It marked a chapter. A transformation into a complete and forward-thinking beauty concept.”
3: “Makeida Midas now works through three channels. There is a point where premium beauty products are sold at prices. Then there’s a point for customers who want to shop directly.. Finally a distribution point that ensures reliable delivery to stores and salons across different locations. This structure helps us serve our customers better while keeping high-quality beauty products within reach.”
4: “The key to makeup starts before you even pick up a brush. It begins with prep. Today’s cosmetics focus on hydration. Protecting the skin barrier. Before you apply any colour your face needs to be clean and well-moisturized. A good primer is a must. It fills in lines smooths pores controls shine and helps your makeup stay in place. Whether you’re working all day or out at night.”
5: “Heavy foundations are no longer the go-to choice. Generations Gen Z and millennials prefer lighter more breathable options. Skin tints BB creams and CC creams are popular for wear. They give a skin- finish and let your real skin texture show through.”
6: “When you need something a high-quality liquid concealer works best. The Revlon Colorstay Skin Awaken 5 in 1 Concealer is an example. It includes Vitamin C and caffeine which brighten and help reduce circles. It covers spots without settling into lines or flaking. For occasions go for an oil-free liquid foundation. These give a look with a matte finish that stays put and controls shine. All while feeling comfortable on the skin.”
7: “Your eyes are the center of attention. That’s why eye makeup can make or break a look. A good daily routine starts with shaping the brows. Use a brow gel or a tipped pencil to define them naturally. For the eyelids choose a palette like the Revlon Colorstay Looks Book Palette. It has a mix of matte shades, shimmers and metallics. Everything you need to go from a neutral daytime look to a smoky evening eye. Finish the look with a coat of curling mascara. It lifts the lashes. Opens up the eyes instantly.”
8: “Blush brings life back to a base faster than anything. Cream and liquid blushes have become favorites in the beauty world. They blend easily into the skin. Give a natural dewy glow. Apply an warm peach shade to the highest points of your cheekbones to lift the face and create a healthy youthful look.”
9: “To complete the look focus on the lips. Matte lipsticks that don’t transfer are still popular for events and long wear.. For daily use people are turning to hydrating lip oils, satin lipsticks and lip stains. A tinted lip oil is especially great. It gives the finish of a gloss. With the nourishment of a balm. Your lips stay plump, hydrated and looking fresh all day.”
9 paragraphs. Must keep them. Use forms instead of contractions (e.g. “you’re” -> “you are”). Avoid pronouns; repeat keywords instead of pronoun. Main keyword: Midas” or “Makeida Midas”?. It’s not clear. We can repeat “Midas” or “Makeida Midas”. Avoid pronouns like “you” maybe?. We need to keep readability. They said repeat keyword(s) instead of using a pronoun. That means if we refer to a subject we repeat the keyword. For example of “you” use “the customer” or “the client”.. The main keyword likely is “Makeida Midas” or “Midas”. We’ll see.
Also “Midas Beauty Concepts” is a noun.
We need to use everyday small words. No contractions. Vary sentence length. Avoid marketing buzzwords. The text is basically marketing copy. We need to humanize.
Also keep formatting: no bullet points. We keep paragraphs.
Also “When you need something ” uses “you”. We could replace “you” with “the customer”.. We might need to keep readability.. Rule says repeat main keyword(s) instead of using a pronoun to refer to them. So we need to avoid pronouns referring to keyword? The main keyword is Midas” and “Makeida Midas”.. Pronouns like “you” might refer to the reader, not the main keyword. So maybe no need to replace “you”. Only avoid pronouns referring to the keyword. Eg. If we say “Midas sells products. It offers quality.” Of “It” use “Midas”. So we should not use “It” to refer to “Midas”.. We can use “Midas”. For example “Midas sells products. Midas offers quality.” That is repetitive. We need to avoid pronouns such as “it”. So we should rewrite sentences to avoid “it”. For example: “Midas sells products at prices.” That is fine.
We also need to avoid pronouns for the keyword. In paragraph 3: “There is a point where premium beauty products are sold at prices.” No pronoun for Midas. Fine.
Paragraph 4: “The key to makeup starts before you even pick up a brush.” “you” is pronoun. Not referring to Midas. It’s okay.
Paragraph 5: “When you need something a high-quality liquid concealer works best.” “you” ok.
Paragraph 6: “Your eyes are the center of attention.” “Your” okay.
Paragraph 7: “Blush brings life back to a base faster than anything ” “Blush” ok.
Paragraph 8: “To complete the look focus on the lips.” ok.
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